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Poor Sentence Structure

The subject and the words that modify it often become separated in a sentence, causing some confusion as to what exactly is being discussed. Here are some examples from actual news releases:

The proposed budget provides salary increases for faculty and staff performing at a satisfactory level of two percent.

The New Mexico Women's Correctional Facility in Grants is scheduling a Christ­mas party for children and grandchildren of inmates under 15.